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It was good. *gives gold star for da heck of romantic poetry* i enjoyed reading and feeling how much love is in two people.

Wow. that is an awesome story. you are a very talented writer. plaese post the next chapter.

Hatred burning from the very fires of hell. His mind going into a diziness spell. For what he was about to do, would show her he had been untrue. Watching ...

Please, write more! This story is so addicting that I want to see what happens!

Talk about the drama! nice job. I liked the flow and it was really unique.

Whoa. I really liked the beat of the poem. You had me hooked from the first two sentances. I really liked the last part of it. Unexpected. Nice. *gives gold ...

Black rumbling clouds, above my head. Tells a story, of those who are dead. You say I'm on the path they took, but if that's what it takes to get ...

Okay, first, I agree to Echolair. The 'poor me' thing, was really good. I just have one question, did you actually kill someone? Besides that, the length wasn't that bad, ...

is it about draco Nope, sorry though :). Awww, that's a sweet poem! It conveyed cutesy romantic feelings AND it had a nice flow and rhythm, which isn't always present ...

I wrote the poem three steps ahead to give to a boy, so this poem recalls his reaction. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- On the bus you smile, your

Wow. I cried. seriously, I cried. That was a very good poem to make me cry. :smt088

Wow. Thats all I can say, wow. I really liked it because it was sad and enjoyable at the same time. poor bird.

I liked it because I could feel the emotion. The words really fit together well in the sentences. Great Job!

un-notice I think that it is supposed to be un-noticed, right? “Oh and one more thing do not underesamate her.” Kakashi nods and walks away.[/quote] You need a comma after ...

Hey thanks. I really know what you mean, I'll try to fix that.